Sunday, May 6, 2012

Sunday Six




      I'm tweaking Protect and Fur this weekend and plan to have it submitted this week. Last week, we saw a very submissive side of Brenna. This week, I'm giving you a glimpse into her normal temperament. :)

     

 “Step one foot closer and I’ll neuter you.” She could feel her upper lip trembling and her teeth elongating, “and I won’t use anaesthesia on either of you.”
“You don’t mean that.” Aiden’s placating tone rubbed Brenna the wrong way and she growled low in her throat.
Craig reached out and grabbed Aiden by the shoulder. “She means it.” 





       Six Sentence Sunday is a blogging group started by Sara Brooks. Every week authors from all different genres post six sentences from their WIP or published works. If you want to read more contributions to this blog roll CLICK HERE.

9 comments:

  1. Looking forward to seeing how you choreograph these three after such a good set up. Top six!

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  2. Yes, I think she means it too!

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  3. LOL. Great six! I wonder what they did to prompt that reaction!

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  4. LOL Great six!!! I think she definitely means it. Love the title, btw!

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  5. LOL, yep, she means it!!! Great 6, you have a humor hit, along with increased tension!

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  6. Quite the contrast with last week's six. Like Craig, I believe her too. lOL

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  7. Oops, got distracted by the picture :) I like how I get a sense for all three of the characters in six very short sentences. And I like her feisty attitude. Great six!

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  8. She definitely means it, so what are they going to do now? Great six.

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