Sunday, May 20, 2012

Sunday Six

      This weeks six is from the book I have just started. Last week, I started with a peek into the newest  business to open up in Ecstasy Lake, The Big Bear Brewery. I thought I'd continue on with a peek into the men who are making their mark in my small town

      “But, why would she go to a concert instead of coming here?"
      Hugh growled behind him and Gavin heard the papers on his brother’s desk rustle around. “Because she likes the band or because we didn't personally asked her to come tonight.”
      “How did we forget to do that?”
      Something soft bounced off his head and a paper ball landed at his feet. “Gavin, go find someone pretty to distract you tonight and stop with the fucking questions.”

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  1. Great six..loved the peek into their characters :)

  2. I definitely can't wait to see more of this. Love the relationship between the brothers here. :-p Somebody doesn't like prying. -grins-

  3. I like the relationship you've shown in this dialogue. It is a fun exchange. :)

  4. Love the playfulness and light-hearted dialogue. Yes, I want to know where "she" is too. LOL!!

  5. Loved the paper ball, Corinne! :) Fun six.

  6. Great dialogue! Hugh's frustration with his brother comes over really well.

  7. Great six! Great dialogue between the guys!