Today's six is another peak into my newest book, Steamed Up Memories, being released tomorrow. :)
With instincts born of battle, he swept his blade up, ducking and twisting his body to avoid contact. Only, he moved a mere moment too late.
The sun flashed on a steel blade aimed for his heart. Time slowed to a crawl, giving Liam time to wish he told Tristan and Yzzi how much he loved them both. What a stupid fool he’d been. For one more chance, he would shout it across the clouds.
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Nice six...loved the image it brought to mind.
ReplyDeleteGreat scene - loved his thoughts and time seeming to slow.
ReplyDeleteAmazing scene.
ReplyDelete"shout it across the clouds" Pure poetry, and perfect for what he's feeling. And, I love real warriors.
ReplyDeleteCongrats on your release tomorrow!
whoa. Great six, thank you!
ReplyDeleteBarb
Wow! Hope he gets another chance! Great fight scene.
ReplyDeleteWell written 6. HOpe he gets teh chance he wants
ReplyDeletePowerful! Good luck with your release tomorrow!!
ReplyDeleteGreat six! Wow! Need to read more :)
ReplyDeleteNot looking good for him.Great six
ReplyDeleteNice action sequence, though I had a hard time imagining how someone can duck, twist and swing their sword up at the same time... is it a two handed sword? Or one he can swing with one hand? ...I'm not very familiar with sword fights :)
ReplyDeleteI love how you switched the tempo to slow motion. That really adds to the tension.
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