tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post7556138443375020151..comments2022-10-26T08:52:49.511-04:00Comments on Corinne Davies: Sunday Six #9Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00320711269916905037noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post-29978080351326759112011-07-11T01:11:44.135-04:002011-07-11T01:11:44.135-04:00Now I am eager to read what he shows her! I think...Now I am eager to read what he shows her! I think it reads beautifully :) Thanks for sharing it with us!Dawn Gore Meadornoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post-74447414483118828092011-07-11T00:44:45.763-04:002011-07-11T00:44:45.763-04:00Love the 6 sentences Corinne. It reads well, flows...Love the 6 sentences Corinne. It reads well, flows nicely with the way you have it. :) Can't wait to read the book nowLunanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post-74895535964097590642011-07-11T00:08:42.731-04:002011-07-11T00:08:42.731-04:00Awesome six, Corinne. I want to read. When do I ge...Awesome six, Corinne. I want to read. When do I get to read? Can you tell I'm impatient? lolSheriVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16002304470079699867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post-22565780846532884482011-07-10T21:56:01.327-04:002011-07-10T21:56:01.327-04:00Show her. Show her.
Great sixShow her. Show her.<br />Great sixAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post-360608974330013822011-07-10T16:00:14.604-04:002011-07-10T16:00:14.604-04:00Love this scene and the photo too. Seems like a we...Love this scene and the photo too. Seems like a well-mannered wolf! <br />Since this is a WIP, I hope you don't mind if I mention my personal prejudice against adverbs that end in LY. Maybe show her nervousness -- she swallowed and stared at the door's lock, making sure it was secure. Something like that.Sandy Nachlingerhttp://iousex.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post-61913719189681083662011-07-10T15:54:39.687-04:002011-07-10T15:54:39.687-04:00Intriguing.. I would like to read more.. I ahve qu...Intriguing.. I would like to read more.. I ahve questions xAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post-62400203286831664232011-07-10T13:53:12.141-04:002011-07-10T13:53:12.141-04:00Nerve-wracking. How does she know who/what she'...Nerve-wracking. How does she know who/what she's letting in?? Very interesting six.Liz Culverhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01940201033733776161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post-42663466967289130512011-07-10T13:12:27.323-04:002011-07-10T13:12:27.323-04:00Ooooh, I think I'd be asking the same question...Ooooh, I think I'd be asking the same question, Mr. Too Handsome Wolf. <br /><br />Great six, Corinne.Savanna Kougarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698138048388102279noreply@blogger.com