tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post4268979142108024532..comments2022-10-26T08:52:49.511-04:00Comments on Corinne Davies: Sunday SixAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00320711269916905037noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post-2264696782359885272012-04-15T23:15:06.870-04:002012-04-15T23:15:06.870-04:00Intriguing six!
And don't you just hate it w...Intriguing six! <br />And don't you just hate it when your characters are difficult? LOL.patonlorrainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04312527117343841653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post-32054489281026723582012-04-15T21:07:40.013-04:002012-04-15T21:07:40.013-04:00I'm sorry your characters are fighting you, bu...I'm sorry your characters are fighting you, but Craig sounds really interesting. Fun six, Corinne. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post-76958962482328378342012-04-15T12:58:12.767-04:002012-04-15T12:58:12.767-04:00You have written a nice internal conflict. Im look...You have written a nice internal conflict. Im looking forward to reading more struggle as his wolf takes over. What will Craig do now that he's accepting of this instinct? Good six!Wildcats Wifehttp://www.wildcatswife.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post-5784714173350397312012-04-15T12:23:30.367-04:002012-04-15T12:23:30.367-04:00"For the first time since the creature became..."For the first time since the creature became part of his life, Craig allowed his instincts to take over." I like that line. Makes me want to know what he does next.Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post-6479740395480654842012-04-15T12:10:58.235-04:002012-04-15T12:10:58.235-04:00Excellent way to show conflict. I liked the descr...Excellent way to show conflict. I liked the description of the howling wolf. Nice job.<br /><br />Michelle :)<br />www.michelle-pickett.com/blogAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08014841868649011587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post-49063957355676735442012-04-15T11:45:39.094-04:002012-04-15T11:45:39.094-04:00I can't wait for this one to come out Corinne!...I can't wait for this one to come out Corinne!Heather Rainierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09622497756351792579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post-87873945687496785042012-04-15T10:43:15.598-04:002012-04-15T10:43:15.598-04:00Good internal conflict! Great six.Good internal conflict! Great six.Karyn Goodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12586701849461714531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-131117145168016788.post-69619974351520661322012-04-15T09:51:03.327-04:002012-04-15T09:51:03.327-04:00Good showing of his struggle. I was a little confu...Good showing of his struggle. I was a little confused at first because I didn't know who said the line of dialogue, but I'm sure it's clear in context of the surrounding sentences...Angela Quarleshttp://www.angelaquarles.comnoreply@blogger.com